after a long period i decided to work on my old pictures. i dont like the composition of the elements (bg/fg), but i hope you can give me some critics that will help me.
as always done in PS CS3 and the time i spent all over is now around ~12-16 hours.
Maybe the problem you have with composition is that the part of the cockpit in the foreground may seem more "wide" than the part where the pilot sits, which is unusual for a fighter jet. (all that considering perspective)
On my side I think it's a good picture and that it's not that much of a problem, though
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hey thank you, i hope i can draw more soon, then i will use your productive critics to improve it, THANKS for your constant kind and objective comments HyaKki
hope to hear from you, greetz moritz
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hey thanks, that´s very friendly but i´m not pleased with the result that you can see at the moment. but i really appreciate your support. greetz neighbour
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On my side I think it's a good picture and that it's not that much of a problem, though
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hope to hear from you, greetz moritz
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